Reviews for Shatter
MidniteLayce chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
More hyper mind rambles! Yay! :D lol Pretty cool and straightforward. And interesting ideas- about the different Sects and powers and such. I'm excited to read more...

~ MidniteLayce19
MidniteLayce chapter 2 . 3/17/2010
Haha And now we find out that Peri isn't quite normal. ;) Her way of explaining things is quite rushed and to the point. I like it! lol It's kind of how my own mind works.

~ MidniteLayce19
MidniteLayce chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Short but entertaining. :) Onto the next chapter!

~ MidniteLayce19
june chapter 28 . 9/25/2009
love the choice in name, Milana is my middle name, this story way cool.
ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 28 . 9/18/2009
dun dun dun...

wow...okay. another cliffhanger?

write more please
L. Valdez chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
I love the line about where they get their profits from. This is very entertaining :D
L. Valdez chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
haha, yes! Short, but wonderful :D
ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 27 . 9/8/2009

finally, now everything is coming together. haha...I'm so excited
ForTheLoveOfWords chapter 26 . 9/2/2009

but it IS unfair to give up this, and then leave us hanging. however, you did post 2 chapters, so i'll let it slide. haha

please keep posting
rika195 chapter 24 . 4/27/2009
wow...great chapter. So easily we all make choices we regret later, but that's life. Thanks for making this story even more believable, even though its an unbelievable story. Or rather, its fantasy, so it can't be found in real life. But it's awesome all the same. I can't wait to see what happens. Keep updating!
rika195 chapter 23 . 4/26/2009 sad! love the history though. it's really cool to learn more about the characters, and especially Peri's deductions from them. Like the ending about sorrow and death. It shows us more about how she is beginning to see more about this strange place she's in. nice job!
cheyenne chapter 20 . 4/25/2009
this is one of the best internet storys i have ever had the pleasure to read. and a tip DON'T STOP WRITING THE STORY! please:)
Jainblu chapter 24 . 4/24/2009
okay so my reviews have pretty much been reactionary comments. But i think now ill get down to the nitty gritty.

The main thing i think you could improve on is description. I mean i really like how fast paced this story is, but i'm not entirely sure wha's going on. Like i get it but you know...

sigh. Oh and also it'd be good if you fleshed out your characters a bit more.

Really like this though, and am putting it on my Alert list kay.
Jainblu chapter 21 . 4/24/2009
What is this place?
Jainblu chapter 17 . 4/24/2009
bites lip.

comic yet ominous
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