Ah so perfect! I'm in such an autumn mood and you totally captured the spirit of it - especially that last line. Perfect!

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CL

very nice, although these hit-all-possible-senses poems tend to leave me a bit cold. better than the vast majority, i'd say.

I love autumn! It's the best time of the year, and I have no idea how some people go their entire lives never experiencing the joys that autumn brings!

I like the pseudo-repetition and style of your language.