Crystal? Jewel?

Find realistic names for the times and place!

I really liked this! You did a really good job and had me interested the entire way through! Good Job!

Sandersonsisters, AKA, Meghan

Okay I have mixed opinions about this story. You do have a good writing style, so you should definitely post some stories because I will review and read them if you do. However, the tone of the story was so sad and I could not help but want to cry at the end when the twins were hanged, it was just too awful. You did well, though, and the story was good, just sad.