|Reviews for i love you|
| Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I never cut, but that's how my mom acted when I told her the first time.
Kep writing or else!
| Charmingly Temporary chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
My only complaint was that I think you could have used a better word instead of "blood" the first time it was used in the second stanza. Other than that, I like the imagery. Perhaps the poem's subject is not quite to my taste, but I couldn't resist reading it after your little teaser in the summary. :) I like how you describe the mother, and my image would have to be "I spread my blood/ hot and thick like/ fresh bakery bread" because I can really just see it very clearly. This was pretty good, so keep it up!