Reviews for I Am But A Shadow
Arista Everett June chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I like this :). Thanks for sharing!

letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Love this- you are so talented with your poetry! Its so beautiful and I love the theme and how well you portray it. Lovely ]
GodsLilBookWorm chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
This is a beautiful poem that describes a not so beautiful feeling. I love the rhyme's.

The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I really like this ...i don't think theres any other way to improve it,congrads to you ! :O
Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
Lovely! Especially liked the repitition of the first line. :)
Backchatgirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
I like this a lot. Poems about shadows, echos or reflections are always really interesting. The rhymes were good too and the repetition was simple but effective.
RandomUser674 chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
The rhythm of this poem is not interrupted anywhere. The rhyme scheme makes the poem flow better. Awesome! Keep writing!
kyox88 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
very good choice of words! i love how you can relate sth as simple as shadow into so many thing! what most important is, it is short and rhyme! a very well written poem! bravo!
kfewh7seeeeeeefji8 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
This is amazing. I like the repetition of the first line, it really ties it all together. Really well written, great concept. Keep it up :)
Past Prototype chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
This makes me think of flying...into the cool night air.

That would certainly be nice, hm...?

I like the 'while the world is spinning fast' a quite a lot for some reason...

It makes meb think of vertigo...which to be sounds rather eerie...(the word that is...not the meaning exactly)

ja ne
Tabitha Wolfsbaine-Owen chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
One word: BEAUTIFUL!

very thought provoking! I love this! chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
I like it.
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
I like how you've used some unexpected rhyme twists in this to catch the reader off guard, and keep them guessing. It isn't often that I enjoy works that use a consistent rhyme scheme, but you've been able to steer clear of stock rhymes and expected verse in all of the works that I've read. That is no small virtue due to the the consistent use of the rhyming form in classical literature. Very enjoyable read. MD:77.
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
This is so brilliant. I loved it, it's really beautiful.
Jareth the Monk chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
Just plain good, the best thing I've read all night. Kind of reminds me of Batman, I don't know why.

I am but a shadow,

And the day confounds my form.

I am wed unto this limbo,

As the eye within the storm.
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