Reviews for raining in the sunshine
roxy chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
well written, short and sweet. i really liked this story. you have a nice writing style.
Jive Heron the Axis Tripper chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
This looks very good so far. I'd love to see another chapter out sometime.
Black Bride Anna chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
Is this a one shot or an ongoing series? I'd really like to see it continue but it's also pretty good as a little one shot. You did a gret job on descrption and the emotion was fantastic.

I urge you to continue this piece.
RIN chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
That was a pretty good chapter. It was really short but it gives enough information to get me into the story. Good job!
Melissa Norvell chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
This, although a little short for my taste, was a pretty good story. You have a good feel for emotion here and your description is flawless. The only critique I have would be to make your chapters longer, unless this is simply your prolouge.

Do continue this. I'd like to see where you take it and if you have the time or simply wish, feel free to check out some of my works as well. Good luck in Fiction writing.