Reviews for Catch Me When I Fall
DragonMistressandTamer chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
This is so short and sweet, but really to the point and effective. You nailed it. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing.
Midnight.Light.Sonata chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
so cute~

love
blurrylights chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
So sweet...*sigh* You write the best fluffy one shots ever! Fred's adorable!
MKSub chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
"person if the world" - "in the world"

this was cute :)
JulyPie chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
He caught her! Cute much? I heart Fred!
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
I actually think the last few lines are unnecessary, but other than that, the cuteness bonanza was awesome to read. (: Yay artistic dreamer for adding this to our c2. (:
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
Sweet, haha. I used to play this trust game with my sister and she didn't trust me because I would let her fall on her ass. Well... Nice story though.
starlit x sky chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I loved this. It was really well written and it made me laugh. ]

Haha, I liked Miss Florence. And Fred. ]

Great job. D
Maybreakmyheart chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
Very cute fluff ;)
RockRollGeekFreak chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
lol...scotlan has lockers too wayhey!...anywho lovely little oneshot its so cute aww...yay and aww again XD

RRGF xox

ps fredrick is a babe ;)
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Daw! So cute!

And if only real boys were like that. Sigh.

V. good job!
balloonfista chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow. I love it! It's awesome.

Just some things I caught...

His smile started to fade (not smiled)

Found Fred staring down at me (not starring)

His arms were still around my waist (not was still)

I looked at her deadpan (not deadpanned)

He, of course, had none, so he just poked his eye (You missed the 'he'

Lol. Sorry 'bout the grammar lesson; I'm such a freak sometimes.

Anyway, I love Fred. He's so sweet. *sigh* And I'm so glad you didn't choose a commonly used name like Eric or Jason or whatever.

Ri
Darkness.Is.Energy chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
Aw... sweet.
Camelia Sinensis chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
I did really like it. :) So sweet and all. The only thing I didn't like was the ending when she talks about having a love story at last. It wasn't that bad, just unnecessary, y'know.

Anyways, congrats!
Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
hopelessly sweet.
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