Reviews for Broken
Blackblooddoomwolf chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Still me somtimes i feel like I'll never be loved enough to want to live.
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I have a question, (if yah don't mind) do you write from experience or not? Because I don't, and I was wondering if I was the odd one here or are there others similar to me? I liked it though. It gives a sad feeling to it.
Fights-With-Words chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
I like this. It's direct, to the point, and leaves the reader with that last provocative question, 'Can you put me back together?' Nice job, it made me think. -Stio/Fights-With-Words from The Roadhouse
DiaRose chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Ha! They finally showed up! I think this is pretty. Not entirely original; I think you should try and work on making your own analogies instead of ones that you've heard before. We've all heard of being broken, and you put it very prettily, but it could mean so much more if you had a new idea entirely. That kind of writing comes with seasoning though, you have plenty of time.