So, I really don't know from where to start. It was just incredibly amazing story! I really have no words to express my feelings this beautiful story. The kind of best friendship shown by this description is honestly angelic. This best friend love makes me remember my own best friend! Your story proves that the true kind of love happens in a moment and stays forever, without our knowledge! You story shows the perfect kind of love story, the one i dreamt of. Keep up your amazing work. You are an incredible writer!

I loved the story :) its so cute! Keep up the good work :D

I know this is mostly a personal choice, but you don't need to bold/italicize your author's notes and also, they'd look much better if they had proper capitalization (to separate it, you can just use the dividers).

Also, the story was quite good (in terms of writing), but it got a little elementary at times. Just watch your grammar and punctuation and er, don't include smilies (it detracts from the quality of the writing).

But I found this really cute, and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

Good luck on FP. (:

I liked this. I caught a few grammar mistakes (but they obviously weren't that big, because I don't remember what they are now lol), but overall I really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked that Scott came over with the death of the family-very sneaky of you to have it be her dog rather than a person.

Good job!

~Mia

I guess a lot of loves are brutally honest to each other. But still, I do believe he could have been more tactful :p You can speak truthes without pissing the other person off, and it wasn't like it was all her fault.

But it's a nice story, still :) So well done!

i'm glad you posted this up.. it is SO cute! :D you have a way with words.. don't be afraid to share more of your work :) great job!

It was adorable! Love it!

Fantastic! Adorable, well written and very true. I loved it )

Very good. Keep up the work.

It's really cute! :)

Aw, it's cute. :D

Though, that zodiac thing was weird - she was a Gemini, but she raised her hand when the teacher asked about Scorpio? Maybe I'm missing something, but it's something to look at...

I'm looking forward to more. :)

It's beautiful! And so sweet!

Ah, Scott...

Was really attached to story.

Am adding it to my favorites.

It was quite funny, when he read out the tombstone of the pug.

Cos when he said he heard of a death in the family, I assumed it was a person (so typical of me -_- lol)

The analysis of love is fantastic, makes sense too.

Great job!

Please write more stories!

love-

strawberrypop