Reviews for The Cross
Aurette chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Wow... this is a very powerful piece with so few words.

I've never heard of a Jorio, but you use the form quite well with this poem. Simple, but I know exactly the feeling you tried to convey. Excellent!
Anaare chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Apologies for not reviewing sooner! You left me all these wonderful reviews, and I did not respond. Again, apologies.

Well, I hadn't had the chance to read this jorio yet. A wonderfully dark jorio, with an interesting rhythm. The final line is very powerful, and ends the piece on a high note, I think. The implications behind this poem are something I will have to put much thought into. And that is always a sign of great poetry.
Aurora Lavender chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
Wow, short yet powerful and the truth hits ya like a ton of bricks. Wonderful
Samuel Peter chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
First of all, beautiful. I'm amazed at how much meaning can be put in so few words. Second...what's a Jorio?