|Reviews for The HYPNOSIS SEQUENCE|
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 2 . 1/21/2010
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
I genuinely enjoyed reading these. I've nothing more to add.
| OneLastEndeavor chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I really like this! It seems like you have a fascination with astronomy? AWESOME.
Ok, onto the actual piece. The rhyming was well-done, not horribly contrived. The mix of what I call "pretty language" with scientific jargon was good. That's all I can really say about this...not much to criticize. Nicely penned and an enjoyable read. :)
| Argentum Vox chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Breathtakingly beautiful. Divine as far as any poem will ever go. You are truly one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of coming across.