HAHA, this is greaT! and its different... thanks, and update soon!

This story is really good, can't wait for the next update.

Great story. Interesting turn of events. I really like the characters that are in it so far. I hope you update soon.

LOVE this cliched a bit but cliche frequently true and the writing is quite imaginative and fun

add this is really really good

and aw i love the ending to this chapter hahah

please add more

like soon?

okay thanks!

I would have preferred if you had begun with the History Class scene, that would have caught my attention, like if you had started with him barging in the class and sitting on her lap, then after that you could introduce the characters.

I like the great job that you did with the dialogue and I found myself chuckling at some parts.

You may want to change the title though, it doesn't seem quite appealing.

But on the whole, I really want to see where Tally and Logan will go. So I'm up for the ride! Keep writing!