Reviews for Lost
Heru chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
aw i love your romance one-shot w

I wonder what Riya commented when she read it
Memme chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
So very sad... both for him, for not seeing what she was doing to herself and how it would ultimately affect his happiness, but also for her, for her not recognizing the value of his initial thoughts.

It's beautifully written and I almost wish she'd stayed around and found out if he'd accept who she was. But then, I think she's got some growing to do before she could let that happen. It's a gorgeous piece.

Now, you gonna finish that other one? *waggle*
imaginativereader12 chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
I loved it so much! I'm hopeless when it comes to critique so I'll just praise it instead! It was a wonderful romance short story! wait...is there more?
HappinessGal chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
Yeah, sounds really good! Kinda sad, but happy too. I love it!
Float a Boat chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I really enjoyed this and it was very well written. The message of this story was something I think a lot of people struggle with and I'm glad that she eventually found herself again. I actually think this is a great start for a longer story. To see what happens to her and how everyone reacts to her leaving. This was really good story.