Reviews for When It Hits, It Hits
siphoned afterglow chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
Shit. Exactly the way i've been feeling these days. sometimes a kind of suffocation eats at me when i think i'll never be able to get there-those novelists, poets, creative people. That the thoughts in my head aren't good enough. i love this and love you for writing this so well.

you're one of the most creative person i know.
she smolders chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
I have nights like that too and this poem is just exquisite.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
something hard and soft and deep

and escalating into fear.