Reviews for The Possessive Beast Within
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Haha, this was really funny, especially the rambling :D :D :D I love it!
Icyfire4w5 chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Even though this is short and fluffy, I can sense that you've put lots and lots of effort into characterizing Lucas and Sarah. Sarah is sweet but not Mary Sue-ish, so I can understand why Lucas is so obsessed with her. I can visualize Lucas as a lovesick little puppy, yet he isn't afraid to confess his feelings and then kiss Sarah.
yellow.jellow chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
"of course i have feelings! i've got tons of 'em" BEST line ever. Very cute story!
cara410 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
Oh my God! That was so terribly cute! I loved it )
Noie chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I LOVE this challenge, because it has produced the best work! Any chance of a sequel? Lucas is hilarious when he rants!
LondonLi chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I loved this; it's so fun to watch a guy crack! And that promt has produced some of my favorite one-shots! Marvelous job.
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
This is os funny and sweet, man. I love it. Especially the beast thing, it's good. But the taxi part? Not so good. You could at least have made it more dramatic.
ValSilph chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
very, very cute
Dot Cubed chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
hee, that was cute! I love the whole Harry Potter comparison too. You write the whole guy voice very well and I thought this was an excellent response to the challenge! Very nice job.

haha, bran muffin vs. chocolate cupcake...I'm still laughing at that :)
Lil Bazza chapter 1 . 10/12/2008

Right, well I didn't review to say that. I reviewed (am reviewing... gah, stupid grammar... who really cares about tense?) to say that I LOVE THIS STORY.

Now I have read quite a few of this challenge (I guess because I'm automatically drawn to the unresolved sexual tension, which really is, resolved but whatevs trevs), but I love how you combine the male perspective with the situation. It's so cute. Like, I totally didn't see that Sarah was chasing Lucas, because Lucas wouldn't necessarily see it like that.

It was so refreshing. I almost feel, though, that the I love you was to early, but there is not much you can do about that is there? Because the rest of the line works really well in that context.

And I loved the Harry Potter references (even though I was much too unhappy with the conclusion of that story) I can kind of better understand the Harry/Ginny relationship (I do remember something about a beast). But Harry Potter is another issue, and shouldn't really be discussed in this review.

Man. You say this is your only one-shot. Which suck, cause I really want to read more. Maybe you have some complete stories. I'm off to check it out.

Keep writing though, it's FANTASTIC.