Reviews for A Wolf's Duty
xiomara209 chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
love the story..cant wait for their date..
dreamer08 chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
aw man... it stopped.. :( for .. love your story.. :).. can hardly wait for more! :D
MertleYuts chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
Not normally one to read these sort of stories, not so much a fan of werewolves and vampires and such you know? But I really like this one! You must update!
ValerieYoung chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
great story! i really like it! poor alex gets torture by her father. i feel soo bad. anyway please update soon cause i wana c wat happens next! good luck on ur story and keep up da good work!
FallenAngelFromTheSky chapter 4 . 10/27/2008

THEY FINALLY MEET! YAY! (does a happy dance) anyway, in love love LOVE the chapter, please update soonER!
Twist Their Emotions chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
It was good but you do have a small plot error. You have Alex say that she can't afford to pay for the alcohol but then as Tobais leaves she offers him money. You might mean that she's willing to give him the money she has to help towards the final cost, but since it isn't specified it doesn't make sense. Besides that it's good, albeit a little rushed.
XxSiennaxX chapter 4 . 10/27/2008
Another great chapter!

I commend Tobias on his self restraint and he seems like a really nice guy - buying her the alcohol despite being worried that it's for her - I know he could tell she was really stressed

I think once you reach 300 hits 2 chapters in one day is a great idea :D!

Update soon please, like ASAP!

XxSiennaxX chapter 3 . 10/27/2008
Oh, this is very interesting.

I can't wait to read what happens next and how she reacts

Update soon please

Twist Their Emotions chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
I think it's good. A good even combination of dialogue and strong paragraphs, which honestly- I don't see much. Good job.
Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
The chapters are short, but interesting.
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