Reviews for A Wolf's Duty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() love the story..cant wait for their date.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw man... it stopped.. :( for .. love your story.. :).. can hardly wait for more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not normally one to read these sort of stories, not so much a fan of werewolves and vampires and such you know? But I really like this one! You must update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! i really like it! poor alex gets torture by her father. i feel soo bad. anyway please update soon cause i wana c wat happens next! good luck on ur story and keep up da good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O THEY FINALLY MEET! YAY! (does a happy dance) anyway, in love love LOVE the chapter, please update soonER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good but you do have a small plot error. You have Alex say that she can't afford to pay for the alcohol but then as Tobais leaves she offers him money. You might mean that she's willing to give him the money she has to help towards the final cost, but since it isn't specified it doesn't make sense. Besides that it's good, albeit a little rushed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! I commend Tobias on his self restraint and he seems like a really nice guy - buying her the alcohol despite being worried that it's for her - I know he could tell she was really stressed I think once you reach 300 hits 2 chapters in one day is a great idea :D! Update soon please, like ASAP! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is very interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next and how she reacts Update soon please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's good. A good even combination of dialogue and strong paragraphs, which honestly- I don't see much. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapters are short, but interesting. |