liike it :)

So I have a question? I foind ur story recently on fictionpress. I think it is great but it ended with tobias telling alex about the challange. Im assuming it stopped here do to plagiarism and not because that is how it ends. Please let me know, if you gey this because I woild like to continue reading the story. I cant go on to the others unless I finish this.

So sorry I wasted my time reading this. If it weren't in the "complete" section I wouldn't have bothered. No way will I bother buying this and I'll be sure to not start any of your other stories. Very frustrated with people like yourself who don't post complete stories. I may as well borrow a book from the library and return it when I'm half way through!

I am so sorry to hear about your troubles with plagiarism. I hope this doesn't discourage you from writing. This story is great and extremely well written. I just bought it on amazon! Keep up the great work.

Nope, can't do it anymore. Done. Finished. I surrender.

This is too bad to put into words. Quite frankly, I'm not surprised it has been self-published, any two-bit writer can put themselves out there now, but still. STILL. Why would you think this is 'good'?

Maybe they weren't plagiarizing your 'work', maybe they were trying to make it better?

a perfect damsel in distress.. this is great!

I absolutely love this story! I can't begin to sy how much it saddens me that someone would try stealing someone else's work. That being said, I'm glad you published on Kindle, because it was such a good story that I wanted to buy it anyways. :-) which I. Have done, and completed book one. I 'm glad you still have this story up partially here so I could put in a review! Kindle has many things going for it, but the review system, at least for mobile is not as good as this one yet. Once again, just wanted to say:amazing! I'll be sure to buy the others someday when I'm not broke any more (hopefully next month). Thanks again!

I am Soo upset! What is wrong with people and plagiarism! I'm seriously ginna cry...where can I get the book?

I just started reading this tonight and i just love it i cant wate to read more and more of your storys.

You write really well. I can't wait to read more! :)

well, I guess I'll never know how this story ends. it's been three years. you still gonna not post the rest? *shakes head*
are the others in the series not finished too? I don't wanna start something and then find half the story gone because you took it down. just asking.

Where is the resolution? We see Lucinda's challenge but no result! I was lead to understand that the story would continue to be up, however the rest on here is just teaser/prequel for the next book...

God this is hilarious Tobias and his inner wolf bickering!

Okay, not gonna lie. I'm a little po'd. As others have said, place a warning in the summary or a notice at the beginning of the first chapter signifying that it is unfinished. Take down the complete label. It only angers readers who expect a complete work.

I understand that you're upset from being plagiarized, but don't make your readers suffer. It's unkind, inconsiderate and upsetting, and it really doesn't make me want to read more or buy the damn book. Quite frankly, It pisses us off.

Well that's just great, I clicked next looking forward for the next chapter and see this? Seriously? Look okay so people plagiarized your work..but don't just leave it like this here on fiction press. Put a note in Chapter 1 saying you won't finish the story on fiction press...and don't put the 'complete' option next to your story! Because it's not! Be responsible please, so there aren't fools like me reading your story and being extremely disappointed when there is no end. Thank goodness I didn't bother reviewing any chapters.