|Reviews for ED Doesn't Just Stand For Erectile Dysfunction|
| young and the reckless chapter 5 . 5/8/2009
a beautiful twist at the end there.
and hey, this is inspiration!
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
now this...this is fantastic.
| Leaves of Labefaction chapter 2 . 4/10/2009
This one is my favorite. Not so much of an original idea, but still.
| Isca chapter 5 . 2/16/2009
"Breaking my body to be the girl who fits into your arms just right." This line is incredibly powerful. I love how ED stands for 'eating disorder.'
"What's the point of perfection if it's easy?" Brilliant twist.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 5 . 2/11/2009
even if this isn't as wonderful as the hand-written copy, i love it.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
a good elaboration on the thought that extremely thin things, like thin paper, are see-through.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
"And I'm good with that.
Happiness is a fresh baked
chocolate chip cookie." - made me happy.
this is interesting.
very in-your-face, in a good way.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Yeah, who cares what the "ideal" image of beauty is. If you find yourself beautiful, and you're happy, that's what really makes someone a beautiful person. Great idea for a series. Keep writing! :)
| Written chapter 4 . 10/14/2008
lovely set so far. dont have any suggestions, but keep up the great work.
| Written chapter 3 . 10/14/2008
wow, creepy, but evocative. most of the wrestlers who were friends with me in high school did a sweating out technique, where they rolled themselves up in a sleeping bag in front of a fireplace to lose water weight.
We never realized that it was dangerous, at the time.
| Written chapter 2 . 10/14/2008
I like this. I mean, at the same time, I don't. because it reminds me of that time in my life.
I was so deceived.
| kit feral chapter 4 . 10/14/2008
Mm. I wish I didn't understand this.
| Written chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
wow, that was awesome. first stanza is definitely my favorite though, I've got to say. it flows really well.
seventeen has a body image challenge? cool.