Reviews for Two Men and a Toddler
Collins-A chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
I didn't get a creepy vibe from Grant at all.. I actually got that vibe from Quinn for buying a stranger a coffee, and then what-the-fuck vibes from Joss for accepting a strange coffee from a strange man, because who knows what could have been in it, and then more what-the-fuck vibes for the sudden and forced friendship you gave them, because no good parent would introduce their child to a stranger OR potential lover to their young child 50 seconds after meeting. It doesn't bring structure to their home, which is what they absolutely need after moving somewhere so new YESTERDAY. They don't even have a place! This whole chapter made me think Yikes. I'm judging hardcore, but I'm probably still going to continue reading because I'm bored.
LOK chapter 23 . 3/24/2016
I just started reading your story and I think its beautiful and amazing. I love how Quinn's and joss relationship stated and I think Teagan is adorable. I have a question though. It's not important but is the story based in 2008 or 2016? Just curious.
UntamedImagination chapter 23 . 3/22/2016
I've been waiting months for this update
GH chapter 22 . 3/20/2016
Please update soon I am hooked
UntamedImagination chapter 21 . 1/29/2016
I'm 100% satisfied with this chapter...100%
FluffyNekro3009 chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Wow have not seen a update from you in forever! As a avid reader I want to say that I'm a big fan of your work. I thought this story was finished but am so excited to read your update. I really love it and is definitely in my top 5 list of stories on this webpage.
Hope this made you smile,

UntamedImagination chapter 20 . 1/23/2016
I've been looking for a new story and I'm so happy that I've found this one. I love when slash stories have babies I think it's just the most adorable thing ever! I suggest more sex.
AnonymousProclamations chapter 19 . 10/3/2015
As sweet and nice as this was . . . I had some problems and am sad to say I will not be following.

Biggest Issue:
Not enough conflict. Everything is solved too easily and it almost all seems to move a bit fast. Can't really care about the relationship since it has nearly no near end moments. A quality of many really good relationships.

Incongruity Issue:
Personality of the mother. She nearly becomes a different person in and out of the chapters. She went from supportive to shocked then to fine. The main character also realized and accepted he was gay way too fast. That's a big moment not to mention he had gotten a woman pregnant before!

This is sweet, but I got a toothache. Sorry.
Stars chapter 19 . 7/29/2015
Sweet 3 I'm really looking forward to reading more, soon I hope!
Blueyes57 chapter 18 . 7/9/2013
well, it's been almost a year. you ever gonna finish this thing?
pewdiepie chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
This story is too cute! if you ever need an editor you should check out KashiRyuu. Hes my bestfriend and he has been trying to get a job as an editor. He needs the experience ans is working on a degree in english literature . It would help him out if you would cheack him out! He has edited for others on fanfiction and fiction press. Thank you for listening.
Vapid Ink chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
Hello, this is pretty much the first story I read here, and I'm glad it was because it's so good. I love your characters and the dialogue and just the whole thing. It's great, and this was the perfect story to get me started on reading on this site. I'll keep on reading and sorry if I don't review every chapter, but I'm kind of multi-tasking at the moment.

Anyway, lovely story, can't wait to read more and I wish you the best of luck with your writing.
Doctor Demon Yaoi-Sama chapter 18 . 9/6/2012
Dear child, explain to me y this story isnt finished?
Angeldreams9 chapter 18 . 8/27/2012
I'm happy to finally hear from you again :D its been so long since you last updated your story!
But the wait was worth it. Hope to soon see a new chapter :)

theStarfly chapter 18 . 8/27/2012
I'm so glad that you're back! I look forward to hearing more of this story!
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