Reviews for White
scripted chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
That. Is. Brilliant.

It's weird...cos with this story, I understand what's going on, at the same time as not having a clue. Though, I don't really think you're meant to fully see exactly what's going on. Heck, the main character's still lost at the end of the story.

I love it though, and it's fantastically written too!

Loving this line:

"A blanket of uneasiness wrapped around him, keeping him uncomfortable but protected from worry and fear."

Never thought or heard of it that way, and I love it. It's such a beautiful image...for uneasiness :L

I love the repetition too, it works so well!

Fantastic job.

-scripted
Caffeinated Brains chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
interesting concept. I thought the writing was very dreamlike, surreal, every detail sort of amplified beyond what it normally would. i don't think i quite understood what this was about though. However, I still think it was engaging and cool and stuff.