awesome :) Please update :)

Hey I love your story! Can't wait to see what happens next...update soon:)

damn this is a good story! Has a perfect blend of sensual romance, fluffiness, and awesome action/blood &guts! keep up the good work! :D

Great chapter! I am glad Gabe is better and Jess is going to be okay. Can't wait to see how they react to each other after their almost hookup. lol I love how Gabe is going through it all in his head. And thinking if she will let him do it again.

Can't wait!

wow! this is probably one of the most engaging stories i've come across on this website..no joke..

Great job Dani! this was a hot chapter and i love how things are moving along. You write beautifully and clearly, it's good to see you back on track too with updates. :)

Woohoo! Finally back on track, Gabe is up and running!

Great story and I cant wait to see what happens next.

Please update asap! :)

"With Great Power, Comes Great Responsibility" ~said by Spiderman's Grandfather... and then later, Spiderman himself.

Loved your Twilight rant :) I wholeheartedly agree that Twilight is an insult to all decent supernatual literature. Great chapter, cant wait to read more!

Meyers butchered the supernatural genre, leading the way for a whole new bunch of young adult authors to get published for other god-awful teen vamp stories. That kind of stuff belongs of Quizilla, and should've STAYED THERE (There's a reason I moved on to FP years ago). I could rant on too- who in our community couldn't? Sorry if my comparison insulted you though- I had meant to put it in the way that your characters are much, MUCH better.

Gabe has come out of his weak moment in full sexual-god glory, and I love it. This was possible the best feeding scene I have ever read- it wasn't a pleasurable act, but it turned into one, which what makes it great. And JUST when you think they are finally getting through this sexual tension, they're shot down, but for a (good?) cause. How much are you going to keep teasing us? Please take your time- we all secretly love it ;)

The sensitive side of Gabe really isn't bad- he hasn't lost all his masculinity, with the caveman thoughts and all, and the way he's trying to figure through his emotions shows that he won't become a big teddybear anytime soon.

People are comparing this to twilight? really? Really really? I think you have a right to rant. This is something more of an Anne Rice standard (I don't read much vampiric writing, so I have very little to compare you too, but you do write like Lilith Saintcrow, which is pretty damn good).

Oh Gabe is just a great mix of some of my personal favorite vampire :D I really enjoy this story and I get excited when you update for sure. With a little re-writing I think this piece could be amazing. True fact.

Anyways, the only issues I really have are 1) Selene and 2) Your dialogue. I love the woman, but she has no dynamic like the rest of your characters! She's too loyal, too one-minded, and it seems like she's trying to be the ultimate villain a bit too hard (though in her head she's the good guy of course!). She's seems a little too typical for your story and could greatly profit from some character building. As for the dialogue, it just needs a bit more description added too it. I think the way it is now lacks the passion you have in the rest of your story.

Jess is amazing by the way, and I can't wait to find out more about Gabe's back history!

Mad props on this story, have fun in Germany, and don't let the twilight fan girls get you down. *thumbs up*

omg, i love it! lol i really like this story. though didnt they have sex before? or was it a dream or something? anyway i like it and i cant wait for more. this story is just so captivating lol

I'm finished chapter one (kinda late, lulz) and I notice the abbreviation NIN and pretty much squealed. I love NIN for the record.. And the first chapter is quite awesome. I'll definitely be favoriting this one.

Sorry. : I'll move away from all Twilight mentionings. After that comment. Forgive me for my giant faux pas.

I think you write wonderfully by the way. Every chapter your words always seem to fit together & there's never any problem with distinguishing who the characters are or what they are thinking & I love that. A lot of people seem to have a continuous dialogue stream going through their chapters & it always threw me off that I couldn't tell what the characters were feeling or even connect to them in any way.

Have fun in Germany.

First, I'd like to say that Edward is no where near Gabe's status. Gabe could kick his sorry ass in no time. The two are nothing a like (and Gabe is so much better _)

Secondly. I loved this chapter. I was a little worried when you had that cliffhanger last chapter cause i wasn't sure when you'd next be updating, but I definitely wasn't expecting that amazing chapter! I really love these two, and I wish I could find my own Gabe, lol. Anyways, keep up the good work!

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