Can you at least please just post an author's note with at least one sentence of what happens in the end... This story is just too good for me to leave unfinished.

This is 'people with mental issues trying to do normalcy' done right. Personal opinion though. I like how Caleb's paranoia is not so much a plot device in the story than a part of his character. You have this melancholy, not dramatic, way of writing. I really enjoyed it.

Thanks for the story :)

You motherless whore, how could you let a good story go to waste?

Hi,

So it's been nearly a year since you've updated this, but the summary seemed really intriguing so I decided to read it. I really love this story. I love Caleb, and Oren, and how their relationship is progressing. I really want to find out more about their pasts, and about their lives. Well...it's been quite a while since you updated so I don't know if you'll ever continue this or will even read this :/ But if you do read this, I just want to say this has been a well-written story so far ;D If you find the time/inspiration, please, please update this.

;D

I LOVES THIS! Keep up the awesomeness! Can't wait to read what happens next! *leaves candy and skips away*

Keep it coming :) I am so curious about both thier lives...

To finally get a call from your father who only wants your bone marrow... that must suck. Unfortunately, Caleb is bad at identifying his own feelings... is he upset about this or does he really not care? To find out that your father is fine and has another family is devastating, to say the least. But what really got to me was how well Oren played the angry son. He's good at lying. So, is he lying to Caleb? Does he only want to find out what makes him tick and then ditch him? I really hope he's sincere because they connect so well when they want to (and Caleb is starting to really like Oren). Obviously, Caleb has a long way to go before he fully trusts Oren, though, and I don't blame him for that one. Can't wait for more because it just got more dramatic. :)

I think they're really good together, Oren and Caleb. But I hope Caleb rethinks the bone marrow thing. I don't know much about the procedure or whatever, and obviously he's got the right to be furious with his dad, but it's someone's life on the line. You can see why he might feel resentful towards his half brother, but it isn't his fault, you know? Whatever. Love it, glad you updated.

caleb needs to start trusting oren. i mean, i can definitely understand how hard it can be to trust people, especially after traumatic experiences, but still. i think they both need to be more open with eachother.

still love their characters. they're so, just, i don't even know. they're awesome. (:

i can't wait until you update again (:

Okay, you must update! I am totally hooked!

Really love Caleb, you write his story so very well :)

My dad is trying hard not to laugh. My mom is oblivious.

- Nice :)

“Huh. No you don’t. You want to pull me apart so you can see how I work. You can’t understand why I’m not in love with you like everyone else, and it pisses you off so you’re returning the favor.”

- Another excellent line. You have a knack for dialogue!

It’s like all he has to do is look, and there I am, without my mask.

-Love that bit

I can’t lose control. Not in front of him. Not because of him. How is it so easy for him to make me feel?

- and that bit too!

Great story! Just read it all in one go, and I love it! I'll be waiting for updates ;)

caleb is so awesome.