Reviews for Swing Set Symphony
Isca chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I like that "Whoosh! Whoosh!" is onomatopoeic; it really enhances the swing imagery.

"Pebbles caught between the buckles." Striking image. Very creative. Wow. :)
OrangeConeDramaQueen chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Cute, very poetic. Reminds me of my childhood as well.
Thomas Rex chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
It seems to me that



might work marginally better, but likely not significantly enough to change it.

Were this my memory, it might be something more like "Crack-whoosh; groan-squeak!" Ah the joys of hours on thew swingset...