|Reviews for Swing Set Symphony|
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I like that "Whoosh! Whoosh!" is onomatopoeic; it really enhances the swing imagery.
"Pebbles caught between the buckles." Striking image. Very creative. Wow. :)
| OrangeConeDramaQueen chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Cute, very poetic. Reminds me of my childhood as well.
| Thomas Rex chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
It seems to me that
might work marginally better, but likely not significantly enough to change it.
Were this my memory, it might be something more like "Crack-whoosh; groan-squeak!" Ah the joys of hours on thew swingset...