|Reviews for Oh, My Darling|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
I like the rhyming, it doesn't sound forced, but the first stanza didn't really rhyme. I like all of your descriptions, they are really nice and sweet. I also like the ending, the total twist was awesome and unexpected.
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| moon-behind-dark-clouds chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
| Yelbie chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Written fairly well. I liked the concept. ;D
| Midnight Whisperers chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
hey this is funny!