Reviews for cutting away
arcane devices chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Yeah... this poem left me with a funny taste in my mouth after I read it because it was pretty darn effective. Abortion is a moral issue that will always be the center of controversy but the way you tackled this was pretty well done. I feel what helped this was the cutting format that you applied because it certainly felt abrupt in most of the right places. I'd probably say the ending was disdainfully well done and the most memorable. Hope to see an update from you soon.
Isca chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
'The woman who killed her baby.' Chilling! Haunting!

'The aftermath.' That's a very captivating/philosophical line :)
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Very nice. I can really feel the emotion in this piece. I especially like this ending - Nice work.