this is pretty interesting. I'm glad I found it. but I have a question, is it going to have an romance in it? good job, update soon!

I'm sorry it's taken me so long to send you a review in return!

Forgive me!

Anyways-

I really like the story idea. Your thoughts and clauses flow nicely, and you have good description.

There are a couple of typos, and I really didn't like the way you ended it.

A suggestion of mine would be to end it with the surrounding people's reactions.

But overall, it was well written and I would love for you to update!

~Luna Turner