Reviews for Stuck in this Place
Darksied chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Darkie likes it. Short sweet (sour too) and to the point. I would use "I am" for the first "I'm" in there though that is just my opinion.
abby2read chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
i like it. it sounds pretty cool
WonderWing chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
Honestly this poem made me think of that guy in Salad Fingers, the main character. In a good way! You'd think with the content of this poem, it would be depressing, but I actually found it kind of comical. Maybe it was the sentence structure o.O

In any case, I liked it!