Reviews for Only Me One Dark Night
Axis Tripper chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I loved this! Great job and awesome poem!
Black Bride Anna chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I absolutely love this poem! You could totally make a one shot story out of it or something. Girl, you have talent and you know how to use it!
Lime-sama chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
This was wonerful. I like the thing about the shadow not being proud of you. Such great metaphors.
Sakura Kinomoto chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
I really like this, especially the Shadow concept.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
fp repeated your title twice.

"My shadow isn’t proud of me/Different personality"... did you mean me? If not you definitely need a comma there

"I go ecstasy"... you go into ecstasy

I think you went a bit overboard with the ellipses at the end. I do like the piece though, it's very powerful and intriguing. I especially like the personification of your shadow in the beginning, it's interesting.

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Melissa Norvell chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
I really like the 'shadows haunt you' theme that you have going here. I don't know why but I'm fascinated by things like this. Must go and review your other poems!