Reviews for merchant sex
Legendary Bum chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
The first line made me want to read it.

The sex part drew me and thats what made me continue

Nice writing style... Keep it up
Katie Nicole chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
You have an intensely interesting style of writing.

I find that, at least half the time, I have no idea what you're talking about, but you say it really well.

Nice attention grabber, by the way.

The first few lines drew me in.