Reviews for Guilt
we've got obsessions chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
This is so beautiful. It would make a gorgeous song.
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Beautiful. Great job. Peace.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
"As long as we let the silence to be our only words,"... just be not to be

"even if I felt like to run after you and"... felt like running

I like the whole lollipop thing, that was really a unique comparison that worked well. Nice job.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
This was absolutly amazing. Awsome job!
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
'our guilt is sweeter than a lollipop" love that line. I agree, this would make a great song.
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Mir ist zwar etwas unklar, warum du dich schuldig f├╝hlst, aber es ist jedenfalls ein wunderbar melodisches Gedicht.
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
"this love is our crime of passion." I love that line!
melodyofthetrees chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
This would likely make an interesting song. Know anybody with a guitar? The poem moves in a lyrical way. And your refrain is powerful and beautiful and tragic. Keep writing!
Isca chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
"This love is our crime of passion." I really liked that line; it was beautiful, yet tragic :)