Loved this

Loved this story. It was amazing, the only problem is that i wanna steal Rin and Deren and keep them both for myself not each other. I'm definitely going to read your other stories!

kinda weird ending but great premise. thanks for sharing!

cute story, i've always liked angel and demon stories.

After hearing of the so called engagement, i suddenly want to fling Darren's book at Rin's head. Just saying. XD

But so far I really like this, reading it all in one sitting. :D

this story rocks!

Oh my gods. What a story.

I loved it. They were soo cute. And I love the little authors notes at the end of each chapter I was cracking up laughing. It was well written although I wish you would have made it a bit longer.

Interesting end. I didn't quite get the change in wings, but I did expect something of the sort. I still enjoyed your writing style.

Now, I'll be a little nitpicky. I wasn't in love with the plot twists, such as the twins or the vampire or the sister. They seemed to be rather convenient and didn't have much depth to them.

All in all, the story was a nice read.

THANKS!

I like your writing style. I also think I like where the story is heading. I wonder how it will turn out or if this is a test for the Fallen Angel, but I'm sure I'll like whatever happens next.

Great characters and interactions. I'm excited for more development from Rin. Maybe he isn't all that he seems. hmm?

Awesome . love it. esp. the sister angle. def write more stories.

~T O~

This has to be one of your best stories. I have read them all but I really love this story. I have read it so many times now but because I realized that I hadnt added you and your story to my favourites...

Thank you for such a brilliant story!

Awesome story! I really liked it and I loved the ending!

~Raven

I love you. The next one should have something with his sister...

Poor Deren...Rin is screwing up so badly and he doesn't even know it...

Great work as always!