Reviews for Welcome Home
Lee's ghost re-born chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
So, bored out of my mind again I thought I'd read one of your poems. Reminds me a bit of an old Irish song "The Homes of Donegal" Well it really has noting to with it..well it sort does..ah I dunno anymore where I was going with that. Anyway judge for yourself. Who knows if my link will show up: .uk/folk-song-lyrics/Homes_of_

Hope this review was entertaining at least. Nobody else can say they argued with themselves in one :o)

wub,

Lee
Eldee chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Ahh, this was so sweet :o

The first stanza sort of had me on the wrong beat for the rest of the poem, for some reason the way I read the first stanza sort of made it rhyme in my head, and from then on I stumbled over it when I realized that there was no set rhyme.

Lmao, I blame myself for that.

Good job! Keep up the good work!