|Reviews for Willa|
| Alex chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
You should publish this book on Amazon that way it's easily accessible to those with kindles which is available for desktop computer use by the way, so you can read books even without a kindle. Anyway, I'm always looking for good kindle books to read, and I always remember Willa, which was a great story, but unfortunately didn't get to read it completely. I hope to one day see it available in the kindle library. God Bless!
| Alex chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
So I came back to finish your amazing story, when I notice it's no longer here, I'm really sorry about the whole plagiarism thing, it's really sad that someone would actually have the nerve to steal something that was rightfully created by you...but can you still post it anyway? I really want to finish reading Willa, it's the best fictionpress story I've ever read in a really long time. Either way, I hope you get published one day, and I can't wait to head to Barnes and Noble and buy your book. Please, honestly try to publish this book, please! I promise you people would really read it, and I mean you already have a noble fan base...so publish!
| SomeCowgirl chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
I came to read your story. I had read somewhere that plagiarism incidents had happened. I haven't been on this site in years! I hope one day you get your story published!
| Brooklyn chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Have you considered publishing on a site like Authonomy? It will give you the opportunity to continue getting feedback from fans and also the potential to get noticed by a publisher. Keep it in mind. I find that constructive feedback along the way helps to smooth and reenforce the writing process. Lovely story you had here. I'm quite sad to see it go.
| roulette rouge chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
I just had to say, before I continue reading, that I very much like this story of yours. It's interesting, your characters are interesting and I love the Austen-esque atmosphere.
All around intriguing, I suppose.
How DO you do it?
Anyway, excellent work! I'm putting this on my alerts. :)
| DefineVintage chapter 32 . 2/8/2010
this story is bloody amazing! I loved Errol from the start even if he does have flaws and I ADORED the awkward tension between them the two times they met in the library after Lydia came into the picture, I want them to kiss so badly! Although whatever you write, it'll probably be awesome :) Oh and I love how you add historical notes
| Layla the fiend chapter 32 . 2/7/2010
So... You need to update. _
| Layla the fiend chapter 19 . 2/7/2010
I just thought you should know that I'm going to violently slaughter Lori.
| Layla the fiend chapter 6 . 2/7/2010
Yay for Willa/Errol!
| Layla the fiend chapter 5 . 2/7/2010
I support Willa/Errol.
| funnechick chapter 32 . 2/7/2010
Wow...so Sir Charles is dead and Errol is now the "man of the house." Oh, and Lori is now engaged to another woman. Haha, good for him.
Well, I wonder what will happen now when Errol comes back, if Willa is still here? Will things be completely different now that Sir Charles isn't there to control things?
| M M chapter 32 . 2/5/2010
It was very generous of Sir Charles to leave something for Willa. When will Errol be back? Hopefully while Willa is still there. It will be interesting to see how he behaves now that he is Sir Errol.
| Ginamc chapter 32 . 2/4/2010
As always, fascinating. Did you have the actual scene where Lori proposes to Willa? If not, that would be a fantastic way to look deeper into her character and answer the questions we all are thinking of: Does she still love Errol? What is the depth of her feelings for him.
Also, a scene where Abigail is introduced to Morton to show us how dull he is. You really can't get much of a sense from a few sentences.
Moreover, I imagine it would have been a bit more interesting to have Sir Charles hit his head, but survive his injuries long enough to have one last conversation with Willa and tell her himself of her inheritance.
A fabulous story, though. Can't you write another after this one like this one? I'd love to read it!
| Kharysa chapter 32 . 2/4/2010
okay. pretty excited that we're getting towards the end. I liked Sir Charles though :(
Just wanted to say that I appreciate that you didn't make Lori's proposal into an epiphany whereafter Willa would go racing off into god knows where to find Errol and confess her undying love. Ridiculous. That always happens for some reason. Just cause you're in love doesnt mean all your problem are gone.
Anyways, I appreciate you as usual ;) and I'm waiting for updates on the other stories!
| Kayin chapter 32 . 2/3/2010
Woot, very much still enamored with the story am I.
So, Willa has a sizable dowry, Errol has a title, and Lydia still needs to be removed from the plot. (b!tch.) I understand what you mean with Lori. I never hated him; I just thought he was a bit of an ass and I was glad when Willa dumped him. I'm sad her father-figure is dead, but it does serve to bring the family together, and that's what matters. Hopefully Lydia will be really crass and obtuse during the mourning period and Errol will have no choice but to give her the boot and oh! look Willa is single and willing. :D
Can't wait for more. Totally loving it.
Love, Ona/Kayin. (I'm getting my FP and FF personalities confused now...)