Reviews for Willa |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, it is nerve-wracking to be afraid of what you don't understand. I hope Willa gains courage and takes a leap into the risky world. It'll do her some good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter ! you really left me hanging... keep up the AMAZING work!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang it, Willa! She should've kissed that man! They could've declared their love for one another and hidden it. Sheesh! But this was such a fantastic chapter. I simply love this story. Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! I loved it! I don't think it was confusing to us, but I felt Willa's confusion plainly - great job conveying her emotions. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok you really had me feeling sad for these two. It's like it's hopeless. I'm rooting for them. That they have the courage to leap together. |
![]() ![]() COME ON! Please, please, please update. I can't quite figure Lori out...any hints? And Abigail is so superbly nasty. I really like Nadia. I can't remember if you said how old Asher was...? Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I love your story. The one thing I'm confused about is if so much drama happened between Willa's father and Errol's father why Willa went to live with him. I understand they were poor, but it just seems a little strange. otherwise great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say, I absolutely love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really well written story and I'm really glad I found it. I especially love Willa's cutting remarks as they are genuinely witty and genuinely cutting. Kudos to you! Update soon! summers-end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story so far! So...this whole mystery behind Sir Charles and Mr. Ward...and also Catherine as well...maybe a scandal? I can't wait to find out what's really written in that letter! Thanks again and update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always look forward to another update of this and I'm never disappointed. Mr. Lori doesn't seem to have any scruples when it comes to luring (possibly using) Nadia despite his infatuation with Willa. For shame! LOVE THIS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say I am mightily impressed. The calm character of Willa makes this such a calm enjoyable read. I am very fond of your writing style! I have been thinking rather in circles trying to come up with this mysterious J. I suggest you read the Color Code by Tyler Hartman I think. After reading the different relationships, I think you're characters might have a bit more life. Many of the characters are rather flat, only wanting peace. I know that this was part of the era, avoiding public outbursts and disagreements, but they still existed and tore people apart. I feel like all the really roiling conflict was just a nasty disagreement in the past. Give the story a bit more life by letting the characters do impulsive things. Not everybody thinks 3 steps ahead like Willa! |
![]() ![]() I love this story! The characters are well developed and it feels like a genuine regency piece. Well done! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, the ending was very cute (: Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() hm If I didn't know any better I would think that Willa's mom was pimping her out to Errol, with the marry for money speech she gave. Luckily Errol actually does have feelings for Willa. Oh and I know I've said it before but...can you please make Abigail suffer in some way, shape, or form. PLEASE? |