I am in LOVE with this! The tension and growing affection between Willa and Errol is very well written. The other relationships Willa has with everyone else are also very well developed and written.

I can't wait for more! You rock!

Hurrah, you updated! (I'm a little belated in reading it due to a heavy workload at uni, but oh well.) Another excellent chapter. I kind of love Errol. XD I love the witty banter in this story - it reminds me, in the best possible way, of Jane Austen.

On a somewhat related note, have you read any of Georgette Heyer's novels? She wrote Regency romances, and they're absolutely fantastic - very witty and amusing, and meticulously researched. I bet you'd like them.

Nice to see that despite all her flare, Willa is just like any other girl who's confused with men. Wonder how she'll take Madam Whitmore's advice.

Allow me to say that you are wasting your time on a website. Go turn this into a novel! I'll bet it'd fly off the shelves! I know I'd be looking everywhere for it. The story is refreshing and different as well as among my favorites. It's the best one I've read in a long time. All you need is a little editing for grammar and punctuation and you're good! The storyline is great and the characters are even better!

First you suck me in by using my name and then you keep me reading by writing a wonderfully believable world-thank you so much for doing research- were there's still drama and a clueless-but-not-annoying-girl with three strapping lads in like with her.

Can't wait until the next chapter.

Also: I pick Errol.

Madame Whitmore is magnificent! I love her character!

I liked it, good job :) Keep it up and update soon!

Faith

Your story shows promise as a writer. If you want to write professionally you will have to fill out the story some more. Keep practicing. The plot, while not detailed, is the start of a very good romance. I would try reading some historical romance novels for tips on setting and exposition. One of my favorites is called Dreaming of You, written by Lisa Kleypas. Some others to try are Flowers from the Storm by Laura Kinsale or How to Marry a Marquis by Julia Quinn. Eloisa James is a Shakespeare Professor at Fordham and she also writes romance novels. Since you seem to like the classics she might be a good author to try and would give you some ideas on the genre! :)

loved it!...still wanting more.

I had been thinking about this story for that past couple of days, thinking about how I've missed it. I'm glad you update, this has to be my most favorite of stories on here :D

Keep up the good work.

Wow! So Errol is still the absolute coolest! And I have to say, that my favorite part in this chapter is when Willa was walking up the stairs, and they both looked at each other for a second. That was fantastic! I could picture the entire scene in my head. Loved that part! But really, the whole chapter was great. It'll be interesting to know how Errol and Willa's relationship grows in future chapters.

And don't worry about belated chapters. I have two chapters written for my story and STILL haven't posted them. But...don't tell anyone. :) School has been my reason also. (I mean, a girl's gotta get to college!) haha.

Anyway, lovely chapter.

hmm, good effort on your part. we're all seeing an increase in the work load right about now ] Kay so writing wise... still solid.. plot developments.. what's all this with Ashaer.. o0oo ]

okay im still interested. thanks for updating. bye bye

Yay, another chapter. :)

Oh goodness, I love the pace of this story and just the overall setting of it. The relationships between one another in great development, I'm glad Willa is able to confide in someone now. As for her and Errol, I'll have to wait and see.

This chapter was the PERFECT way to get my mind off my disgustingly boring Design and Computer Processes class...it was so perfectly intriguing.

They are both falling for each other so perfectly. They HAVE to end up together.

I'm kind of confused with Mr. Lori's thoughts/feelings. Does he still like Willa? Or is that in the past?

And what is Asher's secret? I'm so excited to find out!

Another great chapter. Update soon!

(Oh, I used to be StarsWatchAsIDance, and I just recently changed my name. Just so you know. :P)

Awesome! I like this story a lot.

You should be careful about your historical facts, though. The minute Will received TWO letters from two different men who were not related to her and not engaged to her I was pulled out of the story. Perhaps, it might be more convincing if Asher and Lori wrote to Errol and Errol related the contents of the letter to Willa (besides. I'm sure Lori's letter includes confessions of undying love, and I'd love to see Errol read those to Willa. :P )

Anyway, take it if you like it, or ignore it. I really like your story. Keep writing!