Reviews for Willa |
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elleith chapter 7 . 12/29/2008 You're right about the costumes, they're absolutely gorgeous. |
Humming LadyBug chapter 9 . 12/28/2008 I thought this was a very sweet chapter. Yes, it did seem rushed but it wasn't a bad thing ) Bring on the next one as soon as possible! xp |
tffny012 chapter 9 . 12/28/2008 again I love it! this is one of the best stories I have read! I love how Errol volunteered to go with her for Willa's safety! and I love the way he said that someday he may ask her something and that if she said yes...That was the highlight of the chapter!(for me) |
ShesJustAPerson chapter 9 . 12/28/2008 Ah I love this story! Its really good. Can't wait for more. : D |
blurrylights chapter 9 . 12/28/2008 He loves her! Why else would he accompany her and say that..aww..i love Errol, especially when he's with Willa. :) Madam Whitmore is interesting..i'm curious to see how exactly she knew her father. Keep up the great work, and update soon! |
Account is closed chapter 1 . 12/21/2008 this is well-written. i'm looking forward to reading more :) |
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 8 . 12/18/2008 I really love this chapter! Errol is so...vulnerable here and I really think he cares for Willa. Asher doesn't seem so much of a snob either, but he's still a bit aloof. Lori, well, i think he's fun to laugh at. But i know i shouldn't because he could mess a lot of things up. what, im not sure, but I know he could. I love Errol! Happy early Christmas! |
ShesJustAPerson chapter 8 . 12/18/2008 Love it. I've been waiting for this for a while. XD I can't wait for more. |
Casfar chapter 8 . 12/18/2008 I'm happy that things are moving so smoothly. I love how you develop the relationships between each character. I wonder how Willa will react to her father's letter. |
essie chapter 8 . 12/18/2008 hey, good story. i would suggest you make willa the daughter of a second son or something similar. as a fisherman's daughter it is very romantic of course but i find myself guffawing everytime it's mentioned. maybe i'm a snob? i dont know but at the very least make her father a schoolteacher ... |
Faith Adeline chapter 8 . 12/17/2008 Good job, I liked the chapter. I adore Errol. He's a great character. And Willa is probably one of the best female characters I've read on this site. I really like her. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
blurrylights chapter 8 . 12/17/2008 Oh...embracing in public! *gasp!* :) I was just thinking about this story..and then you reivew! Voila! You really are too good. :) Anyway, why is Lori so...hated? I thought Willa liked him as an acquaintance? Errol likes Willa in a more than platonic way! WOO-HOO! And Willa reciprocates...:) That makes me happy. They're perfect together! Update soon! |
tffny012 chapter 7 . 12/14/2008 wow! i love it! hope you update again soon! i was kind of hoping her first dance would go to errol! |
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 7 . 12/11/2008 haha! antagonist sibling relationship. I can definitely see that now. But i do like Asher. He's trying to make a name for himself and be respectable, but he is a bit private...not that that is bad...but i think you know what i mean. Nice chapter! |
Humming LadyBug chapter 7 . 12/10/2008 It's been such a long time since a story has captured my attention like yours has. I love every single character here (that includes Abigail). God knows every story needs it's villian and she fits the bill perfectly. Hopefully, Willa will ultimately be paired with the adorable eldest Mr. Vincent but I can only keep my fingers crossed while you serve what is to actually come. I'll be looking forward to your update |