Reviews for Willa
Faith Adeline chapter 7 . 12/9/2008
Wimples are what nuns wear :) lol. That's what I thought of. Hahah. Very uncomfortable things. Good chapter. I liked the end. I thought it might be Lori, but am quite pleased it was Asher. Good job. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith
Menginpeh chapter 1 . 12/8/2008
Enjoyed it. :)
ShesJustAPerson chapter 7 . 12/8/2008
I liked this chapter. Saw some depth with Errol and Willa and Mr. Asher. Keep up the good work! : D
blurrylights chapter 7 . 12/8/2008
Eh. Sibling friendships are overrated. :P

Isn't a wimple a bit...nunnish? Anyway, her costume sounded gorgeous. Where did Errol go? Hmm...

I'm so glad you updated! I was so excited when i saw it in my inbox. This really is a great story.

So now, you MUST update soon and make Willa fall in love with Errol! :)
Contrary to Ordinary chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
good stry!

continue writing, i am very much waiting for the next installment

i enjoy your form of writing, and encourage you to continue with many more stories

i noticed one error, and if you dont mind, id like to point it out

its a small one, btu i thought you might want to know:)

as ive learned, when you put miss the period is not necessary because it is the full word, but when you write ms. you must annex a period because it it the abbreviation of miss

good luck in the forthcoming chapters!
blurrylights chapter 6 . 11/28/2008
Aww! Willa and Errol are so perfect for each other...I really hope they end up together. Mr. Lori is a sweetheart too, but he would be PERFECT for Nadia, I think. But really, Willa and Errol make me so happy! They are totally perfect together! :) This was a totally fantabulous chapter, and I hope you update soon! (Oh, and sorry it took a few days for me to review. :) )
Faith Adeline chapter 6 . 11/28/2008
I liked it, good chapter :) A couple mistakes, such as writing instead of riding; things like that. Good job though. Keep it up and update soon :)

Faith
ShesJustAPerson chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
I liked it : D

I can't wait to read more, but I did see a error that I would like to point out. Shall can only be used with I and We (I shall..We shall) and nothing else or else it's wrong. But seeing as this is like..a old English story It might be alright.

Anyways, can't wait for chapter 7 : D
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
I really liked this chapter. I think Errol has a certain attraction for Willa. Maybe not love or that sort of thing, but if nothing else, he's attracted to her good company. Nadia is a sweetheart, and I hope to read more with her in the future! Happy Thanksgiving!
Casfar chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
Great update! :]

Very well written, once again. Haha.

2 am? Goodness, how tired you must've been being awake so early.
chelsea-rae chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
i'm not really good at finding errors but i liked this chapter whether it had corrections or not. )
Faith Adeline chapter 5 . 11/22/2008
I liked it, good job. Willa is a good character, very funny and intelligent. Keep it up and update soon!

Faith
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 5 . 11/21/2008
I like this story. Espcially all of the distinguished talk and informed opinions. I look forward to seeing more of the personalities of all of these characters! Great first couple of chapters!
ShesJustAPerson chapter 5 . 11/20/2008
I like, not much going on of course but still interesting never the less. I can wait for more exciting things to happen.
Menginpeh chapter 5 . 11/20/2008
Just wanted to let you know that I have still been reading and I've been enjoying it, just been really busy. I liked the conversation between Asher and Willa and then the discussion between Errol and Asher. I just watched Becoming Jane and I do think this piece has an Austenish feel to it. I like your characters too. Good job. :)
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