Reviews for Willa |
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Faith Adeline chapter 7 . 12/9/2008 Wimples are what nuns wear :) lol. That's what I thought of. Hahah. Very uncomfortable things. Good chapter. I liked the end. I thought it might be Lori, but am quite pleased it was Asher. Good job. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
Menginpeh chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 Enjoyed it. :) |
ShesJustAPerson chapter 7 . 12/8/2008 I liked this chapter. Saw some depth with Errol and Willa and Mr. Asher. Keep up the good work! : D |
blurrylights chapter 7 . 12/8/2008 Eh. Sibling friendships are overrated. :P Isn't a wimple a bit...nunnish? Anyway, her costume sounded gorgeous. Where did Errol go? Hmm... I'm so glad you updated! I was so excited when i saw it in my inbox. This really is a great story. So now, you MUST update soon and make Willa fall in love with Errol! :) |
Contrary to Ordinary chapter 2 . 12/4/2008 good stry! continue writing, i am very much waiting for the next installment i enjoy your form of writing, and encourage you to continue with many more stories i noticed one error, and if you dont mind, id like to point it out its a small one, btu i thought you might want to know:) as ive learned, when you put miss the period is not necessary because it is the full word, but when you write ms. you must annex a period because it it the abbreviation of miss good luck in the forthcoming chapters! |
blurrylights chapter 6 . 11/28/2008 Aww! Willa and Errol are so perfect for each other...I really hope they end up together. Mr. Lori is a sweetheart too, but he would be PERFECT for Nadia, I think. But really, Willa and Errol make me so happy! They are totally perfect together! :) This was a totally fantabulous chapter, and I hope you update soon! (Oh, and sorry it took a few days for me to review. :) ) |
Faith Adeline chapter 6 . 11/28/2008 I liked it, good chapter :) A couple mistakes, such as writing instead of riding; things like that. Good job though. Keep it up and update soon :) Faith |
ShesJustAPerson chapter 6 . 11/25/2008 I liked it : D I can't wait to read more, but I did see a error that I would like to point out. Shall can only be used with I and We (I shall..We shall) and nothing else or else it's wrong. But seeing as this is like..a old English story It might be alright. Anyways, can't wait for chapter 7 : D |
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 6 . 11/25/2008 I really liked this chapter. I think Errol has a certain attraction for Willa. Maybe not love or that sort of thing, but if nothing else, he's attracted to her good company. Nadia is a sweetheart, and I hope to read more with her in the future! Happy Thanksgiving! |
Casfar chapter 6 . 11/25/2008 Great update! :] Very well written, once again. Haha. 2 am? Goodness, how tired you must've been being awake so early. |
chelsea-rae chapter 6 . 11/25/2008 i'm not really good at finding errors but i liked this chapter whether it had corrections or not. ) |
Faith Adeline chapter 5 . 11/22/2008 I liked it, good job. Willa is a good character, very funny and intelligent. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
AfterTheRainIsGone chapter 5 . 11/21/2008 I like this story. Espcially all of the distinguished talk and informed opinions. I look forward to seeing more of the personalities of all of these characters! Great first couple of chapters! |
ShesJustAPerson chapter 5 . 11/20/2008 I like, not much going on of course but still interesting never the less. I can wait for more exciting things to happen. |
Menginpeh chapter 5 . 11/20/2008 Just wanted to let you know that I have still been reading and I've been enjoying it, just been really busy. I liked the conversation between Asher and Willa and then the discussion between Errol and Asher. I just watched Becoming Jane and I do think this piece has an Austenish feel to it. I like your characters too. Good job. :) |