im glad they are friends

or at lest get each other now

I got to say I am a huge Jane Austen fan, so when I first started reading Willa I immediately saw the similarities between this and Mansfield Park. I loved Mansfield Park the only thing I really disliked about it was Fanny. It’s not that I hated Fanny I just wished she would stick up for herself. I think that’s why I like Willa so much. She doesn’t let anyone walk all over her but at the same time she’s not over the top and you can still believe that she is a lady from the Regency Era. I also love the romance between her and Errol. I can’t wait till they met again.

I love this story, please keep going and update soon!

really,really soon!

:-)

Oh, this chapter kinda brought tears to my eyes. i tried reading it three times before i got into it,because the beginning confused me, but once i go past the first few lines i was throw back into the story. i did not notice any mistakes (grammar/ spelling wise).

i think you got the emotional setting just right,

I look forward to reading the next chapter :)

take care

Ahh! This was a fabulous chapter! I absolutely NEED to know what happens. I liked the talk between Abigail and Willa, and I really do not approve of Miss Rush. Bleh.

You have to update soon, or I will release the conniving schemes of Mr. Lori upon you. :)

Yay! :)

Interesting chapter. I can't wait until Willa sees Errol again. I already dislike Lydia Rush.

I noticed a minor mistake. When Abigail says "And how did your endeavor fair?", it should be "fare", not fair.

Other then that, good job!

Ooh! The first meeting is getting closer! I can't wait! Who has been telling Lydia about Willa? Errol? Abigail? I must say I like Abigail much more in the last few chapters than in all of the previous book as well.

Love it! Just spent the last 3 days reading this! On and off again reading :P

Anyways, great writing and I can't wait for the next update!

Just love it alot, if it was a book I would have bought it!

THank you!

Bye.

Ugh, Lori is back again?

Well, I suppose he had to show up eventually ... Although I'm not exactly sure what Lady Brandon has in mind regarding him and Willa. I think she might have something up her sleeve, and I think I won't like it at all ...

Anyways, I'm very excited to see what happens once Willa arrives back at Wakefield!

Please update soon!

Cheers,

E. Skye

I HAVE to have more Willa or I'll go insane! Have you ever thought of turning this into a published book? I'm sure plenty of people would buy it, including me :P Also, I'm an editor so I could help out with the typos and the grammatics ;) I'd be more than happy to look it over.

I've loved this story so much! It's one of my favorites!

I very much like what you've done with Abigail. Also, I still rather despise Mr Lori (and now Miss Rush just because she's there), and I'm really hoping Errol and Willa get their happy ending together. :D

Ha. I like this chapter. Willa back at home will be interesting. I look forward to seeing her confrontation with Errol's latest girl...

Query: isn't Madame Whitmore ill? Maybe her illness isn't as bad as I thought it was, but it seemed like you had her on the point of death earlier, and now she's traipsing about London like a young lady in her first Season.

I kind of like the change in Abigail's character. It rounds her out a little bit.

Love it so far! The last three chapters were awesome (: I cannot wait to see what happens when Willa and Errol see each other again. Keep it up!

Faith

Its nice to see Abigail dislike someone more than Willa. I can't wait for the first time they see each other.