Reviews for A Single Photo
inkspatters chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
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This piece was very emotive and the simple, reflective writing brought that out in a lovely way. My advice to you would be to go over this and edit very thoroughly because there were so many little mistakes that just kept pulling me out of your story, eg you kept spelling 'each other''eachover'.

You made me feel sad though and that's an achievement, since I don't get sad easily. I feel that you have a great tone and with some polishing this piece could be great.