Reviews for hurricane
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
do you know the neil young song "like a hurricane"? makes me think of that. of another song by Lisa Loeb...
deefective chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Oh, I love the first stanza. Word choice was extremely well done. Not only that but the writing style for this was perfect. You used mostly common words but strung them together in a way that just sounded great. The way you arranged the words helped with the flow a low. The only thing I would way is that last line there. I don't know, it could just be me, but it doesn't seem to match the rest of the piece. Not sure what it is though, it just doesn't sound right. Other than that, great job.

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