Reviews for Never Knew You
deefective chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
Well, I'm not so sure about the way you wrote this. The phrasing of each verse as a question works in some parts but not in others and as a whole, it doesn't really compliment the piece. Also, the non-perfect rhyming was off. It didn't exactly work for the piece either because it made it seem choppy and not-really there, know what I mean? Other than that, nice try.

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lymli chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I like the chorus, the repetition is cool and true.