|Reviews for she's biting her lip|
| Time To Change chapter 13 . 11/6/2008
"". Perfect ending to an already amazinglypowerful piece.
| Time To Change chapter 12 . 11/6/2008
If I could favourite individual chapters, this would definitely be on the list.
This is just... perfect.
| Time To Change chapter 11 . 11/6/2008
Poignant. Seems sorta open to interpretation. Makes you wonder.
| Isca chapter 11 . 11/6/2008
"Don't give me more; you're better than that." I found that line so emotionally complex.
"But, that's the way I've always wanted it." WOW! :)
| Isca chapter 10 . 11/6/2008
"You're no Jesus." Intense! Powerful!
"The choppy waters wish to swallow you whole." Vivid imagery here!
"Maybe I'll watch the bubbles stop." Where is this stuff coming from? IT'S INCREDIBLE! :D
| Time To Change chapter 10 . 11/6/2008
This amused me, in a kind of sarcastic way I s'pose. It's hard to explain. I love how you take everyday things and twist them into intense imagery and tangible feelings.
| Time To Change chapter 9 . 11/2/2008
your writing is darkly magical. mhm.
| Time To Change chapter 7 . 11/2/2008
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| Time To Change chapter 5 . 11/2/2008
Your pieces always make the heart ache just a little bit more.
| Time To Change chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
The repetition really adds depth to the piece and the way you've ordered the whole piece is amazing. It's beautiful.
| Isca chapter 9 . 10/29/2008
"Marble eyes." Beautiful!
| kelsi bones chapter 6 . 10/26/2008
"dieing is something we / limit / ourselves to"
such an amazing line.
| Time To Change chapter 3 . 10/19/2008
the rhetoric is really powerful at the end.
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
excellent use of italics for emphasis