|Reviews for she's biting her lip|
| Time To Change chapter 83 . 1/23/2009
actually, was the last one about bdaytime? Hmm.
I like this one.
Denial is simple.
Accepting is painful.
Easy escapes me.
| Time To Change chapter 82 . 1/23/2009
No idea what this is about really XD
| kelsi bones chapter 81 . 1/21/2009
"connecting the dots is a/lifeline" is so powerful. i love it!
| Isca chapter 79 . 1/16/2009
"Damned if you pull." I like the subtle sarcastic/comedic tone here; it's refreshing! :)
| Isca chapter 80 . 1/16/2009
"I know you need me like the breath you wheeze." Phenomenal simile! :D
| Isca chapter 81 . 1/16/2009
"Connecting the dots is a lifeline." Fascinating imagery!
| Time To Change chapter 78 . 1/16/2009
at a loss.
| Time To Change chapter 76 . 1/16/2009
time eludes me.
| Time To Change chapter 77 . 1/16/2009
sometimes it'd be nice just to be held.
| Time To Change chapter 81 . 1/16/2009
all my dots are connected. I just don't know how to pull them apart.
| Time To Change chapter 80 . 1/16/2009
i like the ambiguity/multiple interpretations one can discover in this.
| Time To Change chapter 79 . 1/16/2009
| Isca chapter 78 . 1/12/2009
"Dignity echoes the air eluding my lungs." Great diction!
"I go to bed with good intentions." That put a smile on my face; it's sweet and reassuring.
| all you need is oxygen chapter 9 . 1/12/2009
i get the feeling these are all amazing.
i just don't have the time to read through them all and understand; my mom is kicking me off the computer. ha.
every time i see this though, i'm reminded of sing it loud's song "bite your lip".
i like what i've read so far, though.
| ColorMyworldGraySam chapter 1 . 1/10/2009