Reviews for she's biting her lip
Isca chapter 77 . 1/10/2009
"Having a heartbeat to lull me to sleep would be spectacular." Is it bad that I laughed when I read that line? I don't mean that in a bad way; I like the fact that it made me happy.

The last two lines are sweet and sincere. :)
Time To Change chapter 75 . 1/4/2009
No one really knows.
Time To Change chapter 74 . 1/4/2009
oh. i like D
Time To Change chapter 73 . 1/4/2009
My fingers are freezing.
Isca chapter 75 . 1/3/2009
"Does she not deserve a chance?" I like how this final line leaves it up to the reader to decide whether the girl is worthy of love or not.
Isca chapter 74 . 1/3/2009
"Beat me to a pulp." Fascinating!
Isca chapter 73 . 1/3/2009
"Just wait until my carcass is cold." Oh, very mysterious and chilling!

"The place you have rested inside my heart has burned, collapsed, and died." Raw emotion here! Heart-breaking!

"At least you're happy." Aww, that's so sad!

GREAT WORK! :)
Time To Change chapter 72 . 1/2/2009
i'm not.
Time To Change chapter 71 . 1/2/2009
i still add to favourites, rather than review. Silly fp designers muddling my braincell.

your pieces always feel sad.
Time To Change chapter 70 . 1/2/2009
bit of both, perhaps.
Isca chapter 71 . 12/28/2008
"But we learn to leap; to fly." Powerful message.

"And you knew how to make me feel alive." A lump just rose in my throat. *Tear* What a beautiful line! :)
Isca chapter 70 . 12/27/2008
"The flip of a heart..." I like how love is considered 'luck' or 'chance' here.

"Maybe this is closure." Forceful! Intense! Full of angst!
Time To Change chapter 69 . 12/22/2008
I think you put "a" where you meant "I" in the second verse.. not sure though

I love this piece.
Time To Change chapter 68 . 12/22/2008
Pretty
Isca chapter 68 . 12/21/2008
"You wouldn't know me, if I was standing right in front of you." Ouch. That line is so harsh. It's wonderful though; really captures the angst.

"You'd never know me if I came up and slit your throat." WOW! Striking imagery! :)
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