|Reviews for she's biting her lip|
| Time To Change chapter 67 . 12/16/2008
almost felt optimistic there p
| Time To Change chapter 66 . 12/16/2008
You always have such an intensity.
| Isca chapter 65 . 12/15/2008
"I'll be ablaze." Wow...what can I say? That line is breath-taking.
| Isca chapter 66 . 12/15/2008
"Touched and burned." That line is so heart-breaking and raw.
"Sharp memories." Chilling. I love the idea of a memory as a shard of glass. Beautiful. Creative.
| Time To Change chapter 65 . 12/12/2008
tangible and profound.
| Time To Change chapter 64 . 12/11/2008
The additional line confused me.
| Isca chapter 64 . 12/11/2008
"What doesn't kill you, only makes you stronger." I guess some would see that line as overused or cliche, but I like it nonetheless. It stands out. It gives you that sense that someone's trying to help you by giving you hope, but at the same time, you feel like smiling weakly or nodding, if only because you know that it didn't help you at all haha. Keep up the good work!
| Time To Change chapter 63 . 12/10/2008
do you want to be captured?
The last three lines are very strong.
| Time To Change chapter 62 . 12/10/2008
it looks like a twister.
i think you missed an "s" on the second gives.
| Isca chapter 61 . 11/28/2008
"Falling truths." Powerful! It made me think if falling snow for some reason :).
"Lighting up the town." Beautiful imagery!
WOW! The idea that someone's eyes are a trigger...that it 'blows your brains out'...honestly, that was AMAZING! :D!
| Time To Change chapter 61 . 11/28/2008
| Time To Change chapter 60 . 11/28/2008
| Isca chapter 60 . 11/27/2008
"You are breathtaking."
| Isca chapter 59 . 11/23/2008
"You've dismayed any hopes of getting back with the summer wind." Beautiful imagery and dramatic undertones.
| Isca chapter 56 . 11/23/2008
"I hope she leaves you to drown." Wow! There's such a great sense of bitterness and intensity in that line! :)