|Reviews for she's biting her lip|
| Isca chapter 54 . 11/23/2008
"Complexity is more than just a game." Very chilling and thought-provoking!
| Time To Change chapter 59 . 11/22/2008
a bit confusing.
| Time To Change chapter 58 . 11/22/2008
extremely powerful. amazing ideas. I like the "educational purpose". I can't single out a verse 'cause the whole piece is just amazing.
| Time To Change chapter 57 . 11/22/2008
simple eloquence and nice flow. well done.
| Time To Change chapter 55 . 11/22/2008
| Time To Change chapter 54 . 11/22/2008
Makes me think of someone forgetting their glasses.
| Isca chapter 52 . 11/22/2008
This poem just blew me away. It's so fierce and intense!
"The stars lay awake to be forgiven." WOW! Brilliant!
"It's the depths in which we travel..." I loved that as the opening line; it really captivates the reader! :)
| Time To Change chapter 53 . 11/21/2008
I love that first line. Really just sets you up for the whole poem. It's amazing. Fantastic imagery. Lovely tone. Excellent piece all round.
| Time To Change chapter 52 . 11/21/2008
reckon that's a lie too.
| fairytale failure chapter 10 . 11/21/2008
Loving the biblical allusios, as well as the vindictive, powerful mood in this.
| fairytale failure chapter 7 . 11/21/2008
The of speech in this are great. The last two lines were my favourite - there's just so much feeling behind it.
| Time To Change chapter 51 . 11/20/2008
wow. Lolz. I want to favourite this one. But I've already got the whole thing on favourite. *sulks*.
I love all of this. You've just pieced it together seamlessly, like an amazing must-have piece of designer clothing (not that I have any designer clothing / but yeah).
basically, what my ramble is trying to say, is that it's awesome.
| Time To Change chapter 50 . 11/20/2008
amazing. Lovely formatting. Powerful piece, very easy for many people to relate to, I'm sure.
| Time To Change chapter 49 . 11/20/2008
I love how this can be interpreted in so many ways. Really opens the imagination.
| Isca chapter 49 . 11/20/2008
I loved the first part. It was so intense and thought-provoking!