Reviews for she's biting her lip |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Complexity is more than just a game." Very chilling and thought-provoking! |
![]() ![]() ![]() a bit confusing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() extremely powerful. amazing ideas. I like the "educational purpose". I can't single out a verse 'cause the whole piece is just amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() simple eloquence and nice flow. well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Makes me think of someone forgetting their glasses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This poem just blew me away. It's so fierce and intense! "The stars lay awake to be forgiven." WOW! Brilliant! "It's the depths in which we travel..." I loved that as the opening line; it really captivates the reader! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that first line. Really just sets you up for the whole poem. It's amazing. Fantastic imagery. Lovely tone. Excellent piece all round. |
![]() ![]() ![]() reckon that's a lie too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the biblical allusios, as well as the vindictive, powerful mood in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The of speech in this are great. The last two lines were my favourite - there's just so much feeling behind it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. Lolz. I want to favourite this one. But I've already got the whole thing on favourite. *sulks*. I love all of this. You've just pieced it together seamlessly, like an amazing must-have piece of designer clothing (not that I have any designer clothing / but yeah). basically, what my ramble is trying to say, is that it's awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing. Lovely formatting. Powerful piece, very easy for many people to relate to, I'm sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how this can be interpreted in so many ways. Really opens the imagination. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the first part. It was so intense and thought-provoking! |