|Reviews for she's biting her lip|
| Isca chapter 48 . 11/20/2008
"I've found my part of heaven on a sinner's night." Brilliant imagery and emotion! :)
| Time To Change chapter 48 . 11/20/2008
| Time To Change chapter 47 . 11/19/2008
Powerful. Emotive. Sad.
| Time To Change chapter 46 . 11/19/2008
This was confusing. But I think that was the point.
| Isca chapter 47 . 11/19/2008
"It is only you you have destroyed." That line is incredibly honest and blunt.
"The fire ignites into a series of truth and reality." What glorious, philosophical lines! :D
| Time To Change chapter 45 . 11/16/2008
very easy to relate to. Powerful. Well done.
| Time To Change chapter 44 . 11/16/2008
(8) And I can't find a reason why you intentionally say goodbye (8)
Relationships suck sometimes.
| Isca chapter 44 . 11/15/2008
"You never meant a word of it." That line is so fierce and full of angst! :)
| Isca chapter 42 . 11/14/2008
"You'll dissect the static from the radio." I thought that line was really interesting and creative!
| Time To Change chapter 43 . 11/14/2008
| Time To Change chapter 42 . 11/14/2008
The end two lines seemed quite hard compared to the fluidity of the first verse. I think it should just be "playing". But that's personal opinion.
I love the first verse.
| Time To Change chapter 41 . 11/13/2008
This is sad.
| Time To Change chapter 40 . 11/13/2008
weird. (in a good way p )
| Time To Change chapter 39 . 11/12/2008
This one just traps the reader in the weariness too, methinks.
| Time To Change chapter 38 . 11/12/2008
I didn't think it was lame. So meh. I thought it felt peaceful, in a way.