Reviews for she's biting her lip
Time To Change chapter 25 . 11/8/2008
I need a drink. shots shots shots. Mhm.

"life's". possessive. uhuh.

loving the "i'm out of focus somewhere"
Time To Change chapter 24 . 11/8/2008
Would you look if you could?

Maybe it isn't.
kelsi bones chapter 18 . 11/7/2008
wow, i can relate to this one so much.

k.X
Time To Change chapter 23 . 11/7/2008
Reminiscent of wishes.
if.i.had.1.wish chapter 8 . 11/7/2008
ooh so powerful and expressive
Time To Change chapter 22 . 11/7/2008
This seems more optimistic. Maybe I missed the "but". XD
Time To Change chapter 21 . 11/7/2008
Beautiful.

I'm kind of out of new descriptions.

It's like when I saw the amazing sunset I captured on my camera (i'm not gd with sunsets) and it was just wow. And I just sat and gazed. That's what you're poems are like. Just awe-making.
Time To Change chapter 20 . 11/7/2008
Ah. Tear jerker.
Time To Change chapter 19 . 11/7/2008
that hurts. just wow.
Time To Change chapter 18 . 11/7/2008
Very ambiguous.
Time To Change chapter 17 . 11/7/2008
Powerful, as always.

Just not sure about the tenses in "feeling safe and be crazy/collide on the side". I found that a bit confusing. Prolly just my braincell being off though.
Time To Change chapter 16 . 11/7/2008
I lovelovelove the second verse. It's all beautiful. But the imagery in the second verse is just WOW.
Time To Change chapter 15 . 11/7/2008
Poignant. It's inspiring how your words can make one physically ache with the emotions conveyed.

I love the second verse

"time stands still/at the/worst/moments."

How true.
Time To Change chapter 14 . 11/7/2008
This is touching. I quite like how this one seems quite peaceful/reserved in a sense. The simplicity making it not so intense, perhaps, but extremely meaningful. Just my interpretation.
Isca chapter 12 . 11/6/2008
"Made it bleed. Made it beat." Chilling imagery!
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