Reviews for If
Kneecap chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
If there's a deeper meaning...it evaded me xD.

If not, then :D. I loved the eccentricity of all this. It was bizarre. I imagined the speaker inventing an dramatic 'skirmish' in their head on the way to school, to pass the time :). Well, that's what I imagined anyway.
deefective chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Oh, I really liked this piece. The word choice sort of gave it one of those jazz time feels, like a smooth talker reciting poetry. Beautiful to read out loud. Also, that second to last line there is golden. I'm not sure how you do it but with those words I just imagine this not so sly looking person crossing the street as if he'd done nothing wrong. Nicely done.

-Dee, from the Review Marathon.

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