Love the opening of this! :)

Relatable due to the title and the emotions portrayed. Excellent end line. It resonates into the forever that haiku needs to trail off until. Extraordinary haiku. MD:77.

I don't like the semi-colon there 'cause neither part is a sentence by itself.

I did like the piece, it's beautiful imagery. I also like the repetition it works well, which is usually hard to pull off in a haiku. I also like how it could be about the state, in which case it's great personification, or just a general person. Nicely done.

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i love this

a beautiful way to describe virginia woolfs death

oh GORGEOUS. this poem is just beauty, seriously. love love love the last line: "the waves, those deep waves."

it's like... I don't know. like a sigh.

this review makes no sense.

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beauty

Oh, I really like this haiku. Especially the second line. It was worded just right. Also, I liked this mainly because the flow was smooth. It wasn't awkward or choppy at all. Nicely done.

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I like how this began and ended with words that begin with the same letter. Interesting manipulation of alliteration.

I also like the way this ended because of its ambiguity.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Beautiful imagery, yet mysterious in a way.

All in all, this haiku makes me wonder.

Great work. )